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| | | Nice poem Kaynil.
Here's a bull**** one I did for English that ended up being one of my teacher's favorite... Tulips From My Great Grandmother's Garden Make Me Feel Like Writing Poetry In the Palerititiaryityness of a Bright Full Moon
Tulips, They rock
Hello Fred
Goodbye Turkeys
Lets got to bed
Lay down your head
Pencils of lead
Semi colon
Semi colon
Semi colon
...
Apples
It was a class favorite as well, lol :)
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10-30-2008, 01:09 AM
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10-30-2008, 07:11 AM
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| | | Here's one that I've just constructed now:
Flashing Lights Pass Our Eyes, Not Seeing The Colour.
With the world coming to the end
The lights flashing around, shades of red
The night is ending, doomsday approaching
The clock is ticking, the world, it bled.
We shut the blinds, and lit the candles
Shivering in our shelters, clinging to our possessions
We hide our eyes, tears overflowing over the brim
We forced this upon ourselves, these are our repercussions.
"If only I had been a better man."
Said one person with a phone in hand
Ready to call his dad for the first time in a decade
But the phone dropped dead, and so came the last stand.
"Mother, I am scared," came the voice of the boy
Brandishing his recently acquired toy.
The Mother spoke: "Do not worry, for I am here.
I am with you always, don't you fear."
As doom was on nigh,
And the time approached what is known as dawn,
A blast radiated from in the sky,
And from all, their life was torn.
But before that happened, it became apparent
To cherish life, and make it flagrant.
They sang a hymn, their last feat
The lesson remains, life is but a treat.
This noble sentiment, lives on today as a reminder
To never bow to sin, and to live undivided.
We continue to live under this with praise
To the individuals whom once sang this phrase.
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10-30-2008, 11:06 PM
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| | | Nice poem,Ventriloquist...Awesome contribution to the thread,same with you Adam,heh. Night Without You
As I lay upon my blanket
And dream of you
A little thought
Ponders in my mind
Fast but true
Slick as silver,fast as the fox
Quick as a quil and flighty as a flock
I think about all your times of joy
But then a realize,I'm just a ploy
To gather your courage,your confidence
Your joy,as you run off again
To your silky skinned joy
So,among your tattered tangles
Of twists,of lullabies
I hear my conscience calling
Far and wide
screaming floating,fluttering
Through the flickering breeze
Crying softly to myself,I realize I need to grief
For all the joy and happiness
All that you've brought,and demolished
Torn,and charred
With Me
Poem by me.
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11-17-2008, 08:55 PM
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| | | In the escasty of my mind
I ponder,lost in illusions
I sit and cry,imagining why
Now I still wonder why
But not like I used to
Because today is the day'when I
Get revenge,plan,rethink then go forth
Thoughts of raging suicide
A dramatic dive off honesty's cliff
I sieze my mind,tell it to just
Calm down but
The moment my hands hit the blade
My life hits a blur or lust,life and memories lost
Now do unto others, what's happening to you
Do it now, you, you
Live life not with eternity
But with the will that blood may lead
A new peom, but I've got some more.
I find them fun to write. :)
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12-01-2008, 09:31 PM
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| | | Lying here beneath all this gore
Looking at the broken banks of the river going north
Living, barely breathing
What's more
We're living in war, tragedy
The ban of my existance
But the most of it I'm sure
Is all a nightmare
Gone away
When I truly wake up
Can someone please call my name
Because this can't be happening here
Not here no, I'll just wait somemore
Me, lying in all this gore
Guts strewn everywhere
Funny how
Across from me
Is the body of the man who was supposed to be in costudy
Standing there over me
Right after laying slain to my family
Funny how
One little mistake
Can make, break or take
Just one little mistake
It starts with one person
Then goes on down the chain
Snapping, cracking flourishing with each given pain
But I've decided I'm not going to be part of this chain
So maybe please mister, shoot me so that I can feel
A unfamiliar pain
One that doesn't evolve my family being slain...
Because I'm sure there's more then death and strife
In my hopefully given next life.
Not very good but it only took me a second to write, it's about wars.
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12-22-2008, 07:07 PM
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| | This one I got out of the front of a book, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.
Oh, the torment bred in the race,
the grinding scream of death
and the stroke that hits the vein,
the haemorrhage none can staunch, the grief,
the curse no one can bear.
But there is a curse in the house
and not outside it, no,
not from others but from them,
their bloody strife. We sing to you,
dark gods beneath the earth.
Now hear you blissful powers underground-
answer the call, send help.
Bless the children, give them triumph now.
-Aeschylus, The Liberation Bearers 
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