Well, the style of writing you use I don't like for some reason, and I only want you to use it in that prologue. What I'm saying is, "Link dodges the boulders as he go's up the slope," Compared to, "Link trecked up the slope, dodging boulders as they rolled at full speed down at him."

I mean, it could be just me, so you don't HAVE to do it, I mean it is YOUR Fan-Fic.
